Then they stopped in the middle of the floor, turned around, reached inside their jackets, and pulled guns on us. Automatic pistols, I think they were. “You sit where you are and don’t move”.
When I saw this scene, I got nervous and I thought that was my end. In my mind, there was only thought: "Why did I enter this place?" My body was shaking and my desire at that moment was disappear from their eyes.
Suddenly, another car pulled up outside and quickly the doors opened and two policeman entered, changing that scene. They were looking for a restroom. While they were asking, the couple of "feed merchants" hid their guns and they said:
" Good bye friends! Glad to let you go!"
And all the guys said: “ Bye Bye”
This was the finish of the story that Daiane Sweet read to us and ask to complete. i hope you enjoy it!
ReplyDeleteYes, I make you sure I enjoyed a lot with your text... It looks complete.
ReplyDeleteYour story, keeps us regardful to know what will happen after certain fact... I loved it.
And continue writing because I'll continue posting at you :]